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Re: devola's pit
« Reply #15 on: December 20, 2017, 11:09:02 PM »
Wow some solid drawing there. I wish you could make a comic and post ir here witg those characters.

Bte shouldnt this be in Hentai section ?

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Re: devola's pit
« Reply #16 on: January 03, 2018, 07:29:24 PM »
They probably should be, let me know if I should move them!

Sorry I haven't been active here, here's a little sketch just to tide things over for a bit though!

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Re: devola's pit
« Reply #17 on: January 03, 2018, 07:35:23 PM »
I gotta love the cheeky expression on the lefthand figure. Look at you, making me want to put aside my witchy books and start doing arts.
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Re: devola's pit
« Reply #18 on: January 03, 2018, 08:15:59 PM »
Two thumbs up  ;D

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Re: devola's pit
« Reply #19 on: January 04, 2018, 01:44:28 AM »
Good stuff !! love the cheeky expression on face. 1+ for what Mahula said. It makes me wanting to start doodling again. Oh I found my 10+ years old Wacom Tab few days back. I wonder if it's still working.

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Re: devola's pit
« Reply #20 on: January 04, 2018, 09:35:48 AM »
Bruh--Kakashi, our head man, taking up the pen again?

Now that you've said it, I need this in my world, man. EVERYBODY DO THE ART!
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Re: devola's pit
« Reply #21 on: January 16, 2018, 05:36:00 PM »
Do mine eyes decieve me!? Gawd, Devola is here, and he is doing ecchi, and the ecchi is awesome.

Dat. Ass
real life has sexy graphics

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Re: devola's pit
« Reply #22 on: January 16, 2018, 07:00:17 PM »
Do mine eyes decieve me!? Gawd, Devola is here, and he is doing ecchi, and the ecchi is awesome.

Dat. Ass

its crazy that i see the curve of the butt cheeks. I've tried but when i do it, it just looks flat. It's my line work, but i still can't do jack.

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Re: devola's pit
« Reply #23 on: June 12, 2018, 03:09:07 PM »
WELP it sure has been a while!

Here have a lewd vampire!

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« Reply #24 on: June 13, 2018, 12:20:02 AM »
I WILL GLADLY HAVE A LEWD VAMPIRE YES THANK.
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Re: devola's pit
« Reply #25 on: June 13, 2018, 12:27:51 AM »
That vampire design and coloring and lighting is freaking good dude!!!

I’d say it is a book cover quality.

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« Reply #26 on: June 13, 2018, 10:38:04 PM »
Thanks a lot guys! Much appreciated, this isn't quite as lewd, but it's pretty suggestive.


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« Reply #27 on: June 14, 2018, 08:46:49 PM »
Helll yessssss devolaaaa. Keep them coming gadaaaamn. As if their outfits weren't amazing enough the ecchi is over onethousand. Also they are sexy af. Also they are greatly done.

Thank you for this very kind offering devola *nosebleed*
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Re: devola's pit
« Reply #28 on: June 26, 2018, 07:01:20 AM »
First off this is a really well done piece and I definitely find it hard to critique.  On this I want to bring up mainly focus and the pose.

Your piece has lots of areas of focus but the true focus should be the action of having the blood/power being sucked out.  The main thing is that the sword is too distracting, it doesn't have to be nearly as desaturated as I reduced it down to but something needs to lead the eye away from it and towards the action.  Another thing that could of done that is maybe the sword ooze magic towards the face or saturate the tattoos as if they were magical.

For the pose, you had a great idea but I think you needed to exaggerate it a bit more.  It seems that the person is enjoying having their blood sucked out but I want to bring up 2 different ways you could exaggerate it a bit more.  First is lustful where the person wants to get more of the pleasure and will pull the vampire.  Although I didn't draw it you could also have the arm on the hip be around the waist as well.  The second pose that I suggested was powerless as if she doesn't have the will to resist, pretty much the body will want use the least amount of effort to stay upright (she is pinned to the wall so she will still be standing in that sense)

Lastly I want to mention that you drew the butt crack connecting with the separation of muscle between the back and glutes.  The crack is about the 2 butt cheeks pressing against each other not so much the muscle itself.

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Re: devola's pit
« Reply #29 on: June 26, 2018, 11:07:10 AM »
Yikes, you even managed to give Dev a good run for his money on crits. And here I thought the overall piece was excellent. Guess I need to actually go and pick up a book about values. That's been a hot topic in the Discord as well as here now.
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