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Forlorn's Ecchi Gallery
« on: January 01, 2017, 02:56:59 PM »

Pictures were removed due to redoing my website. I'll fix this issue when I can.
Since I enjoy to draw women, I'm not afraid to go a little further and illustrate ecchi anime girls, I mean women.  :P

Fan Art/ Reproduction
Prison School

Meiko Shiraki- my attempt at screentoning like the manga





Original Art

« Last Edit: April 28, 2017, 10:52:29 PM by Forlorn Serpent »

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Re: Forlorn's Ecchi Gallery
« Reply #1 on: January 01, 2017, 03:03:25 PM »
Go for it, man. And have fun.

I look forward to seeing what you have in store.
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Re: Forlorn's Ecchi Gallery
« Reply #2 on: January 01, 2017, 09:31:03 PM »
Looks great !


 But that first image is massive ! don't you have a downsized version of it ?

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Re: Forlorn's Ecchi Gallery
« Reply #3 on: January 01, 2017, 09:33:17 PM »
I'll try to fix it.

I can't see the images because i'm prohibited from opening spoilers. I'll re upload the first image but make it smaller.

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Re: Forlorn's Ecchi Gallery
« Reply #4 on: January 01, 2017, 09:56:29 PM »
According to how i see them without the spoilers, i think they are the right size now.

I'll look to see if there is an ideal image size.

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Re: Forlorn's Ecchi Gallery
« Reply #5 on: January 01, 2017, 11:28:19 PM »
I remember we were having a spoiler problem in past. So you are unable to view what's inside spoiler ?

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Re: Forlorn's Ecchi Gallery
« Reply #6 on: January 01, 2017, 11:47:21 PM »
It says that i can't open it.

Spoiler
I can't see what i wrote here. but you guys were able to see the photos i put up earlier.

This is the message "Sorry but you are not allowed to view spoiler contents."

I'm assuming it's because my post count is low or something.


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Re: Forlorn's Ecchi Gallery
« Reply #7 on: January 02, 2017, 12:52:35 AM »
Yeah, I have the same problem with spoilers, honestly. I know that there's some way to use BBCode to adjust the size and pixel ratio of an image you upload with the IMG function, but I've totally forgotten how to do it.

On another note, hmmm, I can appreciate the T&A going on. I think I like the screentoning practice with the Prison School fanart the most so far. The soft shading on the other ones look a little off to me. Maybe they need a little more contrast? I'm not entirely sure.
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Re: Forlorn's Ecchi Gallery
« Reply #8 on: January 02, 2017, 01:28:06 AM »
i think i will try to hit every body part of attraction. Butt, back of the neck, cleavage, legs, feet, lips, eyes. Obviously no actual nudity. Maybe a small tini bikini  ;)

Personal preference, i'm a boob guy. but i need to "educate" myself on other areas of the female body.

@MahluaandMilk, yeah, i still haven't figured out the contrast stuff or actual art techniques. I try to watch youtube videos on how to at least look like professional quality but half the time i'm just "ah, it's done."

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Re: Forlorn's Ecchi Gallery
« Reply #9 on: January 02, 2017, 11:06:20 AM »
I did this one this morning. It was a quick one, by that i mean it took me 3 hours  :P. I'm still trying to improve. I don't know why i see some mistakes only when i show people. I guess it's the pressure of exposure that really makes you look at your work.



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Re: Forlorn's Ecchi Gallery
« Reply #10 on: January 02, 2017, 01:24:08 PM »
It looks like there's an extra outline on her right leg (our right) and it's kind of confusing, but not bad for learning and practice overall. The most I can say is that it looks a little stiff, but that's generally true of people still learning to see form.
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Re: Forlorn's Ecchi Gallery
« Reply #11 on: February 02, 2017, 05:06:40 PM »
Whoa, ambitious works here Forlorn. I could learn from you!

You're definitely the flag bearer for Prison High School haha. Keep at it man. Where are the new stuff?
real life has sexy graphics

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Re: Forlorn's Ecchi Gallery
« Reply #12 on: February 06, 2017, 03:05:44 PM »
Here is a new one. I'm going to do only black and white. I'm trying to learn how to use screentones for background effects. Like instead of drawing clouds, you just erase some of the screentones. I didn't do it on this one because i'm still trying to figure it out.


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Re: Forlorn's Ecchi Gallery
« Reply #13 on: February 07, 2017, 11:57:52 PM »
I can't explain why, but this pose looks a little less stiff. I think it's the practice you've been putting into similar versions of this weight distribution. I'm sure you'll figure out the screentones in time. They look pretty fine.
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Re: Forlorn's Ecchi Gallery
« Reply #14 on: February 09, 2017, 12:11:44 AM »
How can you look stiff in a sauna?

I'm going to bring this up on the mangaraiders forum, but i'll discuss it here for a second. I sketch out, then i outline with a continuous line. I think i need to stop doing that because than it looks like a cut out. Like there is no weight in the lines.